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Unidentified stormtrooper (Bogano)

  • Nominated by: RattsT (talk) 02:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Empire absolutely would have won with more troops like this one. Luke and Leia went out like chumps.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:42, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:26, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 18:30, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
  5. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 10:19, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "who had come to Bogano in the hopes of establishing a base for the Alliance" "in the hopes of" is used for when there's more than one hope, not when there's more than one person hoping, so it should be "in the hope of" here. Fan26 (Talk) 03:59, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. RattsT (talk) 18:58, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
Wookiee
  • Small thing, but "Category:Humans" should be changed to "Category:Unidentified humans." KingWookiee (talk) 02:32, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Added. RattsT (talk) 15:21, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Lewis
  • Stormtrooper Corps should be added to the infobox, I assume you didn't add it because of having to link it? Though per the layout guide you don't actually need to 'Organizations in any character infobox that are inherently implied by a stated role (examples: Stormtrooper Corps does not need to be linked within a character article body if the article states that the character is a stormtrooper)' Lewisr (talk) 04:18, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Added. RattsT (talk) 15:21, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • "A seemingly average Imperial soldier" sounds kinda speculatory.
  • It's not yet standard practice to use {{Film}}, so I think we should wait on using it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:47, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Apologies for the long wait, life happened. Both objections addressed however! RattsT (talk) 23:28, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
      • No worries!
  • This kind of implies that the GCW only spanned between 0 BBY and 3 ABY: "during the Galactic Civil War between 0 BBY and 3 ABY."
  • {{Mediacat}} is missing. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:00, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Both handled. RattsT (talk) 05:16, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • If this story takes place after Yavin, then the minimum should 0 ABY. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:16, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Note that there are other stormtroopers that appear in both this story and its predecessor, but it's impossible to determine if this specific stormtrooper is one of them. RattsT (talk) 02:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I love this I haven’t properly vetted the article yet so I can’t actually cast a support vote, but I appreciate this greatly. — YakovChaimTzvi ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 02:53, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The article uses the term "smuggle". Does the source material use this word as well? Stake black msg 08:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • It does not, no. RattsT (talk) 17:08, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:39, 7 November 2021 (UTC)