Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified red-skinned Nihil

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Unidentified red-skinned Nihil

Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 03:14, 20 January 2025 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 18:10, 17 March 2025 (UTC)
Final word count: 664 words (95 introduction, 487 body, 82 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 645 words (94 introduction, 469 body, 82 behind the scenes)
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"When the young Disciples Krix Kamerat and Zeen Mrala tried to leave with Tromak, another Nihil rebuffed them as they moved behind their orange-skinned colleague." This sentence was a little confusing to me since it wasn't clear to me who was moving and that the orange-skinned colleague was the same as the rebuffing Nihil CometSmudge (talk) 04:42, 6 March 2025 (UTC)
- Reworded.—spookywilloww^talk 03:01, 15 March 2025 (UTC)

~~I feel like the body could use atleast some context around the Battle on Quantxi, maybe mentioning that the Jedi were after captives taken on Trymant IV or something similar.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:17, 16 March 2025 (UTC)
- Added a bit of context, but a bit confused. To my knowledge, there were no captives taken from Trymant IV; Krix wasn't a captive, he willingly fled Trymant IV and started working formally for the Nihil very shortly afterward.—spookywilloww^talk 19:06, 16 March 2025 (UTC)
  - Ah sorry, ignore the captive suggestion I'd misinterpreted it since I've not read the full arc. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:14, 17 March 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:09, 17 March 2025 (UTC)