Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified protoplanetary disk (Kuna's Eye system)

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Unidentified protoplanetary disk (Kuna's Eye system)

  • Nominated by: TK999—[Discuss] 14:37, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: No need to tell. I'll do the Mote next.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ~SavageBOB sig 14:59, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 15:58, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 18:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 19:12, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • I cut the Intro down a bit because it was too long compared to the body. In the future, please try to put only relevant info in the Intro.
  • In the Intro, "Its parent system was less than 1,000 light-years above the galactic plane, located inside the thin disk. The disk was rich in minerals..." It's unclear which disk you are referring to here.
  • Otherwise, looks good. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review!TK999—[Discuss] 13:01, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged…
  • Not sure how the system can be a constellation. Is that the right word here? ~SavageBOB sig 17:52, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
    • My dictionary says that "constellation" can also refer to a set or configuration of related items.TK999—[Discuss] 13:01, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
      • Ah, OK. I think when talking about space-related stuff it's a bit confusing, so if it were me, I'd choose a synonym here, but I defer to you as the guy who expanded the article. :) ~SavageBOB sig 14:59, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)


  • Not an objection per se, but we have articles for many in-uni professions; ought we have one for prospector? ~SavageBOB sig 17:52, July 14, 2011 (UTC)