Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified medic (Coruscant)

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Unidentified medic (Coruscant)

• Nominated by: --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 04:08, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:It's a GAnom. Can't you tell?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 17:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:48, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 16:26, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
5. ~Savage 16:16, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Context on Jade please in the intro.
  • Added.
• Also please find a "synonym" for Jade in this sentence: She assisted Mara Jade after Jade had awaken from a state of unconsciousness inflicted by a battle that had recently taken place. Two times Jade makes it not so fine to read.
  • Done.
• Please find some way to replace some of the "Jades" in the bio and P&T.
  • Switched.
• Maybe another sentence would be better to beginn the info, e.g. A Human female lived during .... In 9 ABY, the woman - now middle-aged, served as a medic..
  • I really don't understand what the problem is with what I have. Is there something in particular that you wanted changed?
    • No just an advide how you can flesh out another sentence. :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
• Context on Leia Organa Solo in the bio.
  • Added.
• It is really neccessarry to mention all collections the comic was included? It seems very overfilled for me.
  • I believe it is necessary. It adds further completeness to the article in my opinion.
    • Allright. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
• Otherwise good work. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Moffship

• Please go through the article and try to clarify to whom you are referring when you say "she" or "her," since everyone you mention is female.
  • Done.
    • Made some modifications, but one source of confusion remains - to whose room does Winter take Jade? Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 18:38, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
      • I tried to rearrange it so it made more sense. How does it look?
• "Mara Jade wanted to attack the woman, feeling that the members of the New Republic, the enemies of the Galactic Empire, should not have been in the Imperial Palace." - Not sure how this is relevant to the medic's P&T.
  • Removed.
• There's no need to mention all the TPBs in which The Last Command 1 was included in the BTS.
  • I suppose it's not needed, but is there any problem with them being included in the BTS? In my opinion, they should be there for completeness. Is there a problem with letting them stay?--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
    • Yes, there is - which is also why we do not list every single TPB in which a comic has been collected as an appearance. Such detail would only be needed in the article for that particular comic issue. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 18:38, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
      • Removed then.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
• That's all for now. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 21:15, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Prepare to be savaged…

• Should the droid be written as "Emdee"? That's a bit like saying that C-3PO is a Threepio-series protocol droid, I think. And can you link to a more specific model, like MD-series medical specialist droid?
  • The Last Command refers to it as an "Emdee droid." As for the second part, linked.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
    • I think that should be OK for a non-first mention. If we assume this is the droid referred to in The Last Command Sourcebook -- which is a safe assumption -- perhaps it's best to spell the droid name out on first mention and then start using the Emdee designator? ~Savage 15:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)
      • How's that look?--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:22, December 27, 2011 (UTC)
• Similarly, that particular droid is an independent character and should probably have its own article.
  • Got it.
• Article for the medical scanning device, too.
  • Made.
• Should you link brain in there somewhere?
  • Linked.
• Should that particular hospital get an article? ~Savage 15:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • Created.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:09, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:25, December 28, 2011 (UTC)