Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified human Bespinite

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Unidentified human Bespinite

• Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 02:27, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This was a complete by chance one, as it was completely random the same person popped up again 33 issues later
• Date Archived: 23:09, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 700 words (152 introduction, 488 body, 60 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:53, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:58, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 21:02, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
4. Panther436 (talk) 02:14, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 22:52, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Brahanite

• "before they left the city aboard an Imperial shuttle." can the shuttle's occupation get some more context? Since saying she joined the Alliance and then saying she left on an Imp shuttle can be a tad confusing.
  • Addressed this now, thanks Lewisr (talk) 15:51, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
• "The human took possession of one of the blasters, and the group opened fire on the troopers." I'm guessing the rest of the group took possession of blasters too? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:19, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Responding to the 2nd only here, but addressed Lewisr (talk) 15:56, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• Just one nitpick: If that's okay for you, could you mention that the Bespinite was to be subjected to Directive 197B-14? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:43, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Added in, thanks Lewisr (talk) 19:14, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:08, 18 September 2023 (UTC)