Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified criminal gang

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Unidentified criminal gang

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:06, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote JangFett (Talk) 16:54, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:37, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:15, March 26, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:19, April 5, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • You don't mention Alderaan in the article body.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:52, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
    • The article still doesn't seem to say that the gang was located on Alderaan, just that they were on Alderaan to hold Prudy hostage at the hospital. They could have traveled to Alderaan from somewhere else.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 20:12, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
      • Removed from the infobox. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:31, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • After further thought, I think you should split the first sentence of the introduction.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:17, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • In the intro, you never link Doc to Kimble.
  • In the body, I know that he is referred to as Doc, but it is probably better to refer to him a Kimble since that is his real name.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:11, March 19, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:19, April 5, 2014 (UTC)