- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Unidentified criminal gang
- Nominated by: Cade
Calrayn 23:42, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Project Hero
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:06, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
JangFett (Talk) 16:54, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:37, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:15, March 26, 2014 (UTC)
grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:19, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Exiled Jedi
You don't mention Alderaan in the article body.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 22:52, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
- The article still doesn't seem to say that the gang was located on Alderaan, just that they were on Alderaan to hold Prudy hostage at the hospital. They could have traveled to Alderaan from somewhere else.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 20:12, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
- The article still doesn't seem to say that the gang was located on Alderaan, just that they were on Alderaan to hold Prudy hostage at the hospital. They could have traveled to Alderaan from somewhere else.--Exiled Jedi
After further thought, I think you should split the first sentence of the introduction.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 01:17, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
In the intro, you never link Doc to Kimble.In the body, I know that he is referred to as Doc, but it is probably better to refer to him a Kimble since that is his real name.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 05:11, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:19, April 5, 2014 (UTC)