Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified coastal defender stormtrooper (Niamos)

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Unidentified coastal defender stormtrooper (Niamos)

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 15:11, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Are you a part of it?
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. I'm just a tourist! BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:54, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 21:39, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
3. This guy would be happy to enforce a certain no-fun rule... JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:07, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:35, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
5. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:39, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Tourist Ziara

• you should mention that Cass was going under as "Keef Girgo" when you say he was using an assumed identity
  • Meh. Added.
• add "6 years" somewhere in the part about Cass' sentencing
  • Good idea, added.
• idk what precedent is on this but you could add a brief accounting of Sam Witwer's past in SW BloodOfIrizi (talk) 03:48, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Went for the absolute minimum since anything beyond that really threatens to spiral out of the article's scope. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:13, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
• Their conversation was interrupted by the approach of the said group id reccommend rephrasing "said group" - the last time theyre mentioned is three sentences prior in the first paragraph, and this doesnt clarify who you're talking about. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 20:41, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
  • They were actually mentioned in the previous sentence :P but I guess that still proves your point, so I've changed it to something that hopefully works better. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:13, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Erebus wasn't a part of it

• Would it be worth mentioning that the six year sentence was changed from a six month sentence due to the Public Order Resentencing Directive and was thereby branded a Class One Offense? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 02:03, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Nah, that really goes beyond the scope of just documenting the consequences of Andor interacting with the trooper. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:18, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Very well. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:39, 19 January 2023 (UTC)