Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified bluedock foreman

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Unidentified bluedock foreman

  • Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 21:39, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CAN with a hat for the only ascendancy character to out-grumpy the grumpiest Chiss, Mid Captain Samakro
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:54, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
  2. Objection resolved via Discord. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 14:15, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
  3. —spookywillowwtalk 00:05, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:41, 13 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:07, 13 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • Though it's not confined to one specific sentence, would you mind making a few small tweaks throughout the article to reduce how dialogue heavy it is? As a whole it a sizeable portion of the article is "he said, she said, he added, replied...etc." when it could focus a touch more on their actions.—spookywillowwtalk 16:36, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Is the Springhawk successfully repaired to appear later in the novel or is this the last time we see it? If it is repaired that should be mentioned at the end of the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:56, 13 January 2023 (UTC)

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