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Unidentified black slayer droid
- Nominated by: Mor9347
(Talk) 04:07, 23 July 2025 (UTC) - Nomination comments: This is my first droid nomination!
- Date Archived: 01:05, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 820 words (170 introduction, 439 body, 211 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 758 words (157 introduction, 436 body, 165 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions
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Support votes
CometSmudge (talk) 04:06, 25 July 2025 (UTC)- SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 19:15, 6 August 2025 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 00:56, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 01:00, 10 August 2025 (UTC)- Booply (talk) 01:03, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Comet
In the infobox, the location and date in the death field should use a single reference noteIt would be good to include the date in the introI think the planet being a planet may need a separate reference since I don't believe it's specified in the episode.Lola's pronouns also don't seem to be citable to the episodeIn History, you state that the droids have boot mounted rockets, but in the BTS you say that's an error in the audio descriptionPrecedent is to have information be cited to the same source in both the infobox and body. Currently the droid's pronouns and sensor color are using different refs, so they should be made consistentI think you need to check again for more sources that mention the droid since I found a few that were missing. The trailer is likely a first mention and needs to be documented in the BTS (Unless there's something that mentioned it earlier):CometSmudge (talk) 23:03, 23 July 2025 (UTC) Visions Revisited: 5 Highlights from "Sith" on StarWars.com (backup link), Meet the Visionaries: Rodrigo Blaas on the Colorful, Intense World of "Sith" on StarWars.com (backup link), Star Wars: Visions Volume 2 | Official Trailer | Disney+ on the official Star Wars YouTube channel (backup link) (Posted on StarWars.com).- Sorry I missed so much, seems like when I was editing in my workbench I forgot to save a couple final edits before I copied it over! addressed all I believe! Mor9347 (Talk) 11:31, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- For the date note, it should be tweaked to mention that the episode's events include its destruction on the planet, since currently the reference doesn't support the location (Like how you have it on Unidentified Drabatan (Hidden Hand)). It also looks like the droid's pronouns still need to be cited to the AD in the body CometSmudge (talk) 21:28, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- Wasn't entirely sure how to cite the date and location properly, does what I did suffice? I also handled the droid's pronouns. Mor9347 (Talk) 21:49, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- Tweaked it a little; I think it's probably unnecessary to have an extra source in the ref to establish they're on an asteroid so took that out (Unless someone else disagrees) CometSmudge (talk) 23:56, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- Wasn't entirely sure how to cite the date and location properly, does what I did suffice? I also handled the droid's pronouns. Mor9347
- For the date note, it should be tweaked to mention that the episode's events include its destruction on the planet, since currently the reference doesn't support the location (Like how you have it on Unidentified Drabatan (Hidden Hand)). It also looks like the droid's pronouns still need to be cited to the AD in the body CometSmudge (talk) 21:28, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry I missed so much, seems like when I was editing in my workbench I forgot to save a couple final edits before I copied it over! addressed all I believe! Mor9347
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:04, 10 August 2025 (UTC)