Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified archaeologist

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified archaeologist
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Macaroni
        • 1.1.2.2 OOM
        • 1.1.2.3 Ayrehead
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified archaeologist

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:20, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Originally a CAN that reached 270 word count. Both objections have addressed. Removal of the contractions and sectioning.
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 20:33, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 17:31, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote OOM 224 20:33, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:37, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:55, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Since the journal is IU, no quotes?
    • Added
  • A little more detail on the LEGO special in the bts would be nice. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:31, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 01:28, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
  • A little context on Ventress, please. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:00, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Done--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:37, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Since the CIS is already mentioned, you could also mention the Republic in both the Biography and the BTS sections.
    • Added
  • Any link for "holo-tale"? Or are we not sure what that could even be referring to? OOM 224 19:47, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
    • We don't know anything about it.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:31, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • "she asked Bilure how he did not know if Solo was not still working for the Jedi" I think this sentence probably needs rewording. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Not sure about this one. Reworded the end, but not sure if that's enough.
  • I think you can mention that Bilure was bartender at the Lodge. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Mentioned
  • You can also mention the part about her looking to check no one is listening before mentioning Jedi, and should probably include that she had heard the story she told from someone else since it reads as though it originated with her at the moment. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Mentioned DarthRuiz30 (talk) 19:22, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:55, 7 November 2021 (UTC)