- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified archaeologist
- Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 00:32, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
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Support
Mad respect to Fry for referencing LEGO Star Wars: The Padawan Menace. Fan26 (Talk) 14:58, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
Object
Luca
Since she is only mentioned by one source, you should remove the "first" from the BTS.- Removed
After the archeologist told bartender Tivoche Bilure the story, she asked him how he knew Solo wasn't still working for the Jedi. do you mean "he asked her" or did the bartender say something else about Solo?LucaRoR
(Talk) 15:53, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
- Reworded--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:44, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
- We avoid using contractions (there are two in the second paragraph).
- Word count is at 165 (167 if you fix the contractions), sectioning is required. LucaRoR (Talk) 12:05, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
