Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified alien rebel

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Unidentified alien rebel

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:36, 4 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A side-nom to Kryndal.
• Date Archived: 11:03, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 311 words (84 introduction, 212 body, 15 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:58, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 18:31, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:13, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 08:44, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:16, 30 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Kryndal's page has quotes-could those be worked in here too, as context?
• "claiming that the not all of the populous of Coruscant" the use of the word "populous" feels awkward here, I think this could be reworded, Fan26 (Talk) 17:56, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:08, 15 April 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• "When the Galactic Empire attacked Echo Base, the alien was shot dead after enemy troops entered the base and Namir stumbled upon the rebel's body."—mind splitting this? Seems a bit run-on in the sense that it reads as if the alien was shot dead when enemy troops came, but also because of Namir stumbling on the body, which wouldn't be quite right.—spookywilloww^talk 00:58, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:23, 24 April 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• Image in the body? Hoth maybe? UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:55, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Voila. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:31, 30 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:02, 30 April 2023 (UTC)