Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified acklay (Burnout arena)

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Unidentified acklay (Burnout arena)

  • Nominated by: SinisterSamurai (talk) 17:48, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The only acklay who is (possibly) force sensitive and capable of using blasters..? SinisterSamurai (talk) 17:48, January 19, 2014 (UTC)

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Welcome!
  • Alright, just first glance objections. First of all, welcome and good luck! ;)
  • You are missing a ton of links, please fix it.
    • It seems that indeed I am. If there's more I'm overlooking, lemme know.
  • I would suggest a name change to Unidentified acklay (Burnout arena).
    • Wookieepedia loves apply the "Unidentified" label, but I'm not entirely sure it applies to this case. If you like, though, I can happily move it to Burnout acklay or even Underburn acklay, to mimic the Cauldron wampa. SinisterSamurai (talk) 03:28, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
      • Actually, it's fine. I'll move it to the suggested namespace as soon as the review process is complete. SinisterSamurai (talk) 03:04, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
        • You can and should move it and the GAN to the appropriate name now. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 01:49, February 14, 2014 (UTC)
          • ...Yep. I was holding off cause I didn't want to break the template. For whatever reason, it didn't even occur to me to move the GAN. SinisterSamurai (talk) 04:54, February 15, 2014 (UTC)
            • And it seems you should've waited a big longer, the acklay in the name needs to be decapitalized. This is entirely my fault, apologies! ;/
  • The suitable templates in the "Appearances" section. Winterz (talk) 19:54, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • If the creature is not guaranteed to be Force-sensitive during the game, I do not think it should be in the Force-sensitive creatures category.
  • The intro should mention the era that the acklay was alive.
  • I think that the introduction should be expanded slightly. Another sentence should be enough.
  • As the acklay is a creature, I think that the Pet infobox would be more appropriate.
  • Could you give some context for what an acklay is and where the species is from. While this would probably not need to be included in a regular character article, since this is a non-sentient creature, I believe it should be added in this case.
  • "While ostensibly illegal..." The introduction makes it sound like the arena is illegal, while the body doesn't make things as clear. Is the arena mentioned to be illegal under the Thaerian government, but they still use it to kill dissidents? Please clarify.
  • "after being led on a chase through Burnout by Nim'Ri's cousin, Xirossk." I'm confused, who was led on the chase here?
  • "The beast's corpse was jettisoned from an airlock adjacent to the arena pens." Who jettisoned the beast's corpse?
  • Are there any alternate adventure paths that you can mention in the behind the scenes section?
  • You should probably also note that the events in the RPG tags are used since they represent the primary path provided in the adventures.
  • Is there any personality related information from the adventures? If there is anything in common between the three tiers you could fill out a small personality and traits section.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 02:10, February 23, 2014 (UTC)
Cav
  • I think some elaboration on events is needed - why was Nim'ri kidnapped and killed for instance, and why were the civilians captured to be used as fodder? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:27, February 27, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote 2 weeks have passed without objections being complied with. Winterz (talk) 16:43, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 19:28, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:31, March 10, 2014 (UTC)