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Unidentified Yuuzhan Vong warrior

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 23:43, November 2, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Unknown to most historians, Warmaster Lah kept in operation a special contingent of warriors whose sole purpose was to help the warmaster get through his bad days

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Loyal to the death. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:54, November 7, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Balance Point is underrated. Menkooroo (talk) 01:11, November 22, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:21, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:50, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:32, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:31, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Lah lah
  • Missing punctuation at the end of the bio quote. Period? Exclamation mark? We just don't know!
  • Do Jacen and Leia flee? If so, can you note it? It's not really clear why Lah and the warriors don't just re-enter the building and keep fighting them. Menkooroo (talk) 00:39, November 22, 2013 (UTC)
    • Both are done, thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 01:07, November 22, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Wondering whether or not there should be articles/red links for his two companions.
    • Nothing much distinguishes the two from each other - they both avert their gazes, and then carry this guy's body away. I can create two articles for them if you see fit however.
  • This wording is awkward. I'd like to see it reworked: "Offering his life so that the warmaster could make the avenging sure" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:43, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:31, December 17, 2013 (UTC)