Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Wookiee worker 1

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Unidentified Wookiee worker 1

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 06:10, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: You'll be seeing more of these...

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 12:24, July 15, 2013 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:16, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 21:20, July 26, 2013 (UTC)
4. This article's quality in terms of basic Wookieepedia formatting (naming section titles correctly, not capitalizing section titles, capitalizing pipelinks and template names in brackets) and grammar (misspelled words, missing apostrophes, etc.) was downright terrible. I suggest paying closer attention to your work if you plan on nominating additional articles. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:48, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
5. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:53, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd has one thing

• "to take part in its colonization being undertaken by its species." By what species? The Wookiees? It's unclear here. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:34, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • Changed. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 09:31, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Dogma has two things

• I think the intro could stand to be expanded. Maybe mention how the gundarks attacked them, and how they fought them off.
  • Done.
• Also, I think Cade's been changing Unidentified Gender cats to Unspecified Gender cats. I think you should do that here too. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:35, July 12, 2013 (UTC)
  • Uhh, wasn't that just about species, not genders? Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 09:31, July 15, 2013 (UTC)
    • I guess so.... 501st dogma^(talk) 12:24, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:56, August 2, 2013 (UTC)