Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Wookiee command center

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified Wookiee command center
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 501st
        • 1.1.2.2 Floyd
        • 1.1.2.3 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified Wookiee command center

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 00:11, April 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Writing articles based on things in tutorial levels are... interesting

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Nice work. 501st dogma(talk) 12:32, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Not too shabby, but please take a look at my copy edit for the (mainly formatting) things I had to fix. And I despised the tutorial in Empire at War. :P —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 15:56, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 23:41, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:27, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:44, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • Article for the attack?
    • All articles for the Wookiee tutorial campaign battles are in the Alaris Prime colonial war article, but this has been brought up in another GB nom, so I may have to open this up to discussion
  • If you are using gameplay paths, shouldn't we have gameplay divider somewhere? 501st dogma(talk) 22:28, April 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • Forgot about that, but the problem is that I can't seem a template that would be applicable, most situations like this are normally light/dark side choices, and 100 % completion wouldn't be appropriate since you still have to collect all of the resources regardless of the order. I may have to make one myself. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 04:18, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
      • You might want to have one that sounds like the RPG path header, as the article is following a specific path. 501st dogma(talk) 11:58, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
        • Created the template and put it in, hope it works. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 06:57, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
          • Looks good. 501st dogma(talk) 12:32, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Missing punctuation in lead quote.
  • What planet was Alaris Prime a moon of? This should be mentioned somewhere.
  • You call Alaris Prime a "world" in the bio. Shouldn't this be changed? IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 05:22, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done all. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 07:39, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • These three Wookiees whom the article is referencing, and which I'm to understand the "History" section is detailing, should they not have articles? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:17, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • OK, I'll start doing them now, however I will note that each of these articles will be extremely similar to each other because by the nature of this level it can't be canonically determined what everyone did. Should I have articles for the other two workers who get created in the level as well. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 05:09, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
      • I leave all of this up to your judgment. If each character has unique information to him, I think they deserve an article, no matter how similar they might all be to one another. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:55, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
        • Articles all created, will hopefully nom them at some point. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 10:28, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:00, June 8, 2013 (UTC)