Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Wookiee base (fortress)

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Unidentified Wookiee base (fortress)

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:18, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Should be my last tutorial GAN after all this time
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Support

1. Great work! Dentface (talk) 03:30, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:03, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Are we really at the end of this journey? UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:54, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
   • The song is ending, but the story never ends. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:43, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 05:52, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni base (pasta)

• Missing a {{Mediacat}}. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:52, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:16, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• I think the intro can be expanded with more details about what happened in the base.
• "The portions of the base that were not protected by the treeline were covered by walls partially built by the Wookiee Shoran, which stood some distance from the rest of the buildings." Dangling participle here. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:41, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:49, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Ecks

• "The initial Wookiees at the base included Chewbacca, Shoran, eight workers, seven bowcaster troopers, two HummBike speeders, and two dragon troopers." Were the speeders Wookiees, or were they piloted by Wookiees? Clarification is needed. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:16, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I thought everyone knew speeders are just modified Wookiees :P Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:13, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• In the intro I'd change Trade Federation fortress to Trade Federation base, otherwise it isn't clear you're talking about the same base mentioned earlier. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:39, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done, had to change a bit of the wording since we can't definitively say the base was destroyed
• Where you say "in clockwise order" you need to specify where that order begins. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:39, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. —Unsigned comment by Commander Code-8 (talk • contribs)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)