Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Tynnan diplomat

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Unidentified Tynnan diplomat

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 17:40, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tailed, toothy and about to get diplomatic on yo' choobies. Back for round two.
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Support

1. Nice job. I tweaked the article throughout my review, I would recommend you review my edits. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:14, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:18, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
3. Dentface (talk) 20:07, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:29, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
5. MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 23:37, 22 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Unidentified Kilji diplomat 2: electric boogaloo

• (Review note) Please review my copy-edit. Oh, and, feel free to join the Discord so reviews are more efficient.
  • Ugh. Blame the autocorrect on my Kindle for both of those errors. I'm usually quite eagle-eyed with that sort of thing; nonetheless, apologies for letting them slip by this time. OtterSurf (talk) 18:05, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
• Is there an article for the war? If not, could you create an article and link it?
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:36, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• Does TEGW in fact state that the Tynnan traveled with the admiral in 137 ABY?
  • Yes. OtterSurf (talk) 18:05, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
• Missing links to Diplomat/Legends, eye, and matriarch.
  • Whew, egregious omissions indeed! Added. OtterSurf (talk) 18:14, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
• Is the matriarch's family notable enough for a page?
  • I wouldn't say so, no. OtterSurf (talk) 13:20, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• I don't think mentioning TEGW's full release date is necessary, as no other sources released within the same year. (example) — just in case, this is an objection. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:28, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
  • This is correct per the LG, for the record. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:30, 15 September 2022 (UTC),
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 16:53, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
• To kind of illustrate the character, I believe switching Stazi's picture into one of a Tynnan would be beneficial. But I'll leave that choice to you. Samonic ^(Talk) 17:53, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
  • I've changed the image and it does look more apropos, so I think you were right on that. OtterSurf (talk) 15:06, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• Does TEGW in fact state that Kuthard was located in the Sepan sector?
  • Yes. OtterSurf (talk) 15:45, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• Please link and mention the Ripoblus in the introduction. Samonic ^(Talk) 15:32, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 15:55, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• "The Tynnan possessed knowledge of property claims, past atrocities, and peace proposals relative to the locality of the Dimok matriarch's village, which he attempted to employ while negotiating with her." The Tynnan tried to employ the village? I would mention that in the body. Also, what "past atrocities" are you referring to? Samonic ^(Talk) 08:09, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • No, he attempted to employ his knowledge. I've reworded that part for clarity. And the EGTW just mentions past atrocities without going into detail. OtterSurf (talk) 08:26, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Can you share that mention here?
      • It's on page 240 of the EGTW. OtterSurf (talk) 19:03, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• You should say "family" instead of "family history," as there is one more question unrelated to the family's history. Samonic ^(Talk) 19:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 19:41, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• You can source the EGTW's 2012 release to the reference book. Samonic ^(Talk) 19:59, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Of course I can. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 20:06, 20 September 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• "and attempted to employ that knowledge while negotiating with her" -- I don't think this really belongs in the S+A section, and I don't even see mention of it in the bio. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:15, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed. OtterSurf (talk) 09:52, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Honestly, if she just knew about these things and used the knowledge while negotiating, I don't really think that's enough to have a S+A section. That stuff can just be documented in the bio. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:42, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:57, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Dent

• The diplomat's gender should be mentioned in the intro. Dentface (talk) 06:17, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 10:15, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:37, 22 December 2022 (UTC)