Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Twi'lek 2 (Ambush in Cloud City)

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Unidentified Twi'lek 2 (Ambush in Cloud City)

  • Nominated by: Darth Morrt 10:13, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Actually the same as the other, but reworded.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Another solid effort, Morrt. :) ~SavageBOB sig 15:42, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 02:54, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:14, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 16:23, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
  5. JangFett (Talk) 04:29, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
  6. Gave it a read and made a slight tweak to the wording for better flow. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:36, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Prepare to be savaged…
  • Most of the same objections raised above for this guy's clone apply to this article as well. Let me know when you have a chance to revise, and I'll review again. ~SavageBOB sig 20:02, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
    • Revised per previous objections. Darth Morrt 23:59, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • Rather than just linking to the species names Duros and Quarren, can you make articles on these specific individuals?
    • Both are created. Darth Morrt 08:10, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
  • Can you rewrite the first paragraph of "Bio" in chronological order? It's kind of backwards right now: the group arrives at Cloud City, then Raynor hires them, then Raynor loses the game of sabacc to Calrissian. ~SavageBOB sig 01:30, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson
  • You need to mention the year this all took place in the Intro.
  • In the Intro, "...a hangar with the help of his guards." I think a link is missing here.
  • Otherwise, good job Morrt. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 20:21, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
    • Both addresses. Darth Morrt 02:46, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The article here essentially refers to this character as a bounty hunter, which I'm not sure is accurate. If he is a bounty hunter, the article needs to reflect this in the infobox template and categories. And your other character articles from this scenario should be treated as bounty hunters too. If he's not, this should be reworded: "Under Bossk's leadship, the bounty hunters infiltrated the city..." Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:09, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
    • He is not a bounty hunter. From SLR: "[Bossk] brought along some muscle -- an unsavory band of mercenaries and cutthroats." Darth Morrt 20:28, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:43, April 24, 2011 (UTC)