Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Trade Federation squad

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Unidentified Trade Federation squad

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 10:16, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My is just a sad story of CANs that get too big.

(1 ACs/2 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:45, June 23, 2014 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:50, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
3. Rearranged a thing or two. Try to avoid passive voice. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 02:31, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• the squad[3] participated in the Trade Federation's illegal effort to colonize the moon Alaris Prime.[1] There the squad[3] was given the task of exterminating the gundarks, a predatory species that had been attacking the Trade Federation.[1] The squad[3]: Can you vary the use of squad here?
• These Wookiees were colonists led by the Wookiee Chewbacca and advised by Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn, who were legally colonizing the moon: Can you reword this a bit, e.g. but the stuff about their colonization earlier?
  • Done both. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 10:25, June 23, 2014 (UTC)
• A story I know well. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:21, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Emperor's advice

• Be sure to fix every dupplicated links on the bio.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 22:18, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • I can't see any, and you may have the wrong article; this one doesn't have a bio. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:31, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
    • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 21:59, July 31, 2014 (UTC) 1358 ^(Talk) 21:59, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• You have a double reference in the History section.
• Your copy-and-paste method of mass nomination, which repeatedly results in the same mistakes that you refuse to recognize or even be aware of since I doubt you even read these comments, continues to nauseate me. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:37, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• I no longer have any interest in this article. May an AC please archive this. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:06, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • I would be willing to watch over this article and do my best to address objections. Would be a shame it that work would go to waste. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:47, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
• I have to ask, what exactly makes this squad notable enough for an article? Because if there's a valid reason, I'm not seeing it after reading through this article. Winterz (talk) 19:06, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Well, I have no answer for that. TC it. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:10, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. Unaddressed objections for over two weeks. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:31, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:31, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:37, August 23, 2014 (UTC)