Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Trade Federation squad

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Unidentified Trade Federation squad

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 07:40, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Companion article to this droid. Hopefully it stays under the word count this time.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:37, May 9, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:57, May 10, 2014 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:45, May 24, 2014 (UTC)
4. Long as EJ is satisfied. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:02, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Needs an (Indirect mention only) tag.
  • Done.
• My count says 201 words, so you need an intro, sorry. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:29, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • Blargh! I'll get to it later. Too lazy right now. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 07:36, May 6, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done, now two words below the limit. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 07:33, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
• who were colonists led by Chewbacca and advised by Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn, who were legally colonizing the moon: Please reword. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:57, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:28, May 9, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• "The squad headed to the gundark's nest to wipe them out, and upon completing the slaughter, encountered members of the Wookiee species from the planet Kashyyyk, a group of colonists led by Chewbacca and advised by Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn, who were legally colonizing the moon." This sentence really needs to be split up.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:47, May 18, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 08:14, May 19, 2014 (UTC)
• In the intro you use "galactic" to describe the Trade Federation, while in the organization you use "intergalactic." As the Trade Federation operates within one galaxy, I believe galactic is a better choice.
• Could you tweak the start of the organization section so that the intro and the organization section don't both start like: "A squad of at least eleven B1 battle droids..."--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:14, May 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • Both done. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:14, May 30, 2014 (UTC)
• I was wondering, are these battle droids ever explicitly referred to as a squad in the game?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:34, May 31, 2014 (UTC)
  • They aren't, but I asked Corellian Premier a little while back about any information from the strategy guide from this level, and he referred to it as a squad, but I don't have the guide so I don't know if that's exactly what it says. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:18, May 31, 2014 (UTC)
    • Just checked and the strat guide indeed calls it a squad, and the article has now been updated to reflect this. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 11:32, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
• I would like to note that this article is at 250 words, which means that it should be taken to the GAN page.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:51, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Back to 249, there was a word that was unintentionally placed outside of the ref template it was supposed to be in. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 07:50, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
• Could you provide context for Chewbacca?
• In this case, I think "slaughter" is probably too POV a term to use.
• The introduction makes it sound like the squad was formed before they were sent to Alaris Prime. Is this the case, or could the squad have been formed once they got to the moon?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:36, June 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • All done, but now the article is past 250. To the GAN! Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:26, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Should it be mentioned that all the droids in the squad have grey markings? Or is that a game mechanic? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, May 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • That's just a game mechanic to show which team they're on. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 00:14, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• My count shows over 250 words. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:27, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • It's 249 by mine You don't count the headings. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:53, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • 249 indeed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:08, May 14, 2014 (UTC)