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Unidentified Sith Lord (Darth Bane's first Ruusan victim)

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Is foot-crush a new application of Telekinesis? :p Winterz (talk) 00:00, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  2. DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 00:04, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:31, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  4. That was rather cold. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:56, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:21, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Curbstomped. Splorct! Menkooroo (talk) 01:41, January 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. My support is there, although I've come up with a picky thing. Could you just give a brief aftermath in the history section, telling us what happened to the Order and/or Bane himself? Winterz (talk) 00:00, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Missing punctuation in the bio quote.
  • "However, he was still able to survive the fifth battle" Did he really survive the battle? He was mortally wounded, I'm not sure I would call that surviving. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:45, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
Splorct
  • In the intro: "After speaking with Bane about the preceding skirmish and the status of the Sith Order, Bane killed the man..." reads as if Bane spoke with himself about the skirmish. Can you re-word?
  • The image used in the biography is a full sentence and should get punctuation in the caption.
  • The intro mentions that his training was in 1,002 BBY, but that date is missing from the article body.
  • I just want to confirm that his blue eyes can be sourced to the novel --- the infobox sources the comic, but P&T sources the novel.
  • "The novel also noted that the man's wound was visible to Bane, whereas the injury was not visible in the comic book." Is this really a discrepancy? Was it definitely not visible to Bane in the comic, or was it just not visible to the reader?
  • Since POD begins before JVS 2 begins, it should go first in the "Appearances" section. Menkooroo (talk) 15:59, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
    • All taken care of, I believe. Thanks for the review, Menk!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 17:02, January 14, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:42, January 15, 2013 (UTC)


  • Many thanks to Menkooroo for these two images.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:52, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
  • For WP:NSW.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:57, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
  • It's not really an objection which is why I placed it here, but shouldn't it be noted that Darth Bane thought that he was so much of a lesser Sith that he didn't learn his name because of that. DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 00:04, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
    • Noted in the P&A section.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 00:18, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
      • Partially, what I meant was because Bane felt that he was so much of a lesser Sith, he felt it would be a waste of time bothering to learn his name. Could that be mentioned also or would that fall more under the P&T of Bane. DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 00:21, January 7, 2013 (UTC)