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Unidentified Rodian with jacket
- Nominated by: Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 23:45, February 5, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I know wanted to spare me the humiliation Jang, but I wanna see if we can actually do something with it. Also, for the BtS section, would I refer to a TV Guide or something to source the claim that the show aired on Cartoon Network? Or how far does the sourcing go?
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- The skin color field of the infobox is not sourced.
- Done
- Can the show be used to source that he was on Coruscant during the first year of the war?
- I'm not entirely sure what I would source too. Maybe Chronology, as this is the episode where Anakin is knighted. I think it's referenced in the New Essential Chronolgy, so I'll double check that (Though I'm sure I know the answer). I don't believe The Clone Wars changed anything, did it?
- "The Rodian could have been found walking the streets of Coruscant's bowels..." The start of this sentence makes it sound like speculation, please reword it.
- How does that look?
- On the other hand, do we know that the Rodian walked the streets multiple times? He could have been a traveler who was just stopping on the planet for a brief stop.
- Reworded.
- I would try to pare down the second paragraph of the bio as it gets a little too play-by-play.
- How does that look?
- "yet was rather sullen-looking around 22 BBY." As he is a Rodian, I'm not sure we can say that he is sullen-looking.
- Animation always plays the expression. However, a lot of media such as books and The Clone Wars commonly have emoting rubber masks. Silood and Onaconda Farr for example seemed to emote a bit with their faces despite being rubber. I'm also wondering about this guy's eyes, due to how pronounced those pupils are, again an animation by product I suppose. Other Rodians in this show though don't have as much facial detail.
- "The character has achieved some minor fame from humor articles that exist on other websites, including the infamous Darthipedia." Is there really enough to have this sentence?
- Every incarnation of Encyclopedia Dramatica too, and someone created a Facebook page for the Rodian a few years back. I'd say there is some odd amount of Fan recognition.
- Please note that there should be one space in between sentences, not two.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 15:30, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
- Yadda yadda (This was probably written before I started to incorporate that rule with some effort, as the rule apparently changed without warning. Who comes up with that anyways?) Note that double spacing does not actually appear in the article, but it does pump up the file size needlessly. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 19:08, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
