Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Quarren (Ambush in Cloud City)

Nominated by: Darth Morrt 11:57, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Yet another, only the Duros is missing.

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Quarren (Ambush in Cloud City)

~~"Raynor felt that his opponent cheated,—which was actually true—that's way he hired the Trandoshan bounty hunter Bossk..." I'm confused as to what you're trying to say here.~~
- Sorry, another typo. Raynor could be sure of Calrissian's cheating. Darth Morrt 13:56, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
  - ~~It would be better to change the sentence to "...so he hired..." or "...thus hiring..." or something similar.~~ Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 14:24, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
    - Done. I just tried to make it less similar to the other noms of the Sore Loser's Revenge. Darth Morrt 16:05, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
Just as a note, I fixed a lot of double linking and grammar mistakes. Next time, I would recommend reading over your article a few times before nomming it just to make sure it's as perfect as possible. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 12:49, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

I have an issue with the article specifying that Calrissian actually did cheat, only because none of your other articles written for these mercenaries specifies this. If you're going to specify this fact in this article, make sure you do so for all of them. Or, simply remove it from this article. Your choice: "Raynor felt that his opponent cheated—which was actually true" Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Not relevant here, so I've removed it. Darth Morrt 01:31, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:26, May 10, 2011 (UTC)