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Unidentified Nihil (Osler community)

  • Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 03:11, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Last of the SfH 2 unnamed Nihil
  • Date Archived: 19:20, 14 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 612 words (108 introduction, 450 body, 54 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 657 words (115 introduction, 487 body, 55 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS, WP:THR

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Support votes

  1. ACvote Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 17:19, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:12, 8 June 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:31, 12 June 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 18:49, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Panther
  • Is there anything actually confirming this character is the Cloud leader? Because I don't see anything and I don't think them yelling the rallying cry is enough. One of the Nihil who was running from Ty even calls for the cloud-leader after this character's death, which makes it seem unlikely to me.
    • Removed reference to Cloud leader Chipchip88 (talk) 20:33, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
  • In the BtS, the source you're referencing right now doesn't mention Phase III, so you'll need to cite something else for that. Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 01:39, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Rather than the current title referring to a greater species that this character doesn't belong to in a vague way, "Unidentified Nihil (Osler community)", "Unidentified Nihil (Ty Yorrick)", and "Unidentified red-haired Nihil" are all available and I think one of those would suit this article better.
  • There's no mention of Ty kicking the Nihil, which should probably be included.
  • I think the first sentence of the P&T is overcomplicated and slightly assumptive. All you really need after that comma is that they shouted a Nihil war cry and maybe use one adjective/descriptor like 'motivating' or something along those lines and you're good. Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 01:53, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Final sentence of equipment section needs a rework: 'unusual' and calling the lights 'sensors' should be removed, both of those are subjective/assumptions. You should probably include the visor of the mask in the list of things that glowed, and I think you can just call them red, not red and pink. The panel in which they're pink is bathed in pink light, and they're consistently red in the close ups. Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 03:37, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Sorry I keep finding things one by one like this, but I don't see the holster mentioned in the equipment section. I know they have a blaster and then it disappears, but it looks like they only have a belt with small brown pouches, not a real holster. Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 17:59, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
    • No worries. Rearranged to belt Chipchip88 (talk) 16:38, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • Humanoid can be added Lewisr (talk) 18:31, 8 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Removed on others before, but you can cut the reference for issue 1 Lewisr (talk) 18:31, 8 June 2025 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • I'm not sure what "a noticeable Yorrick" is supposed to mean. Is it saying she was standing out in the open when she noticed the child?
  • "Stunned at the arrival of Yorrick, the Tholothian ordered the Nihil to run." The sentence is structured in a way that attributes the being stunned to "the Tholothian," which means Yorrick was stunned at her own arrival.
  • There was a settlement in the Cloud's ship? Or is that saying she delivered the children to the residents of the settlement that were in the ship? If the latter, please clarify. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 02:03, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
    • It was the latter. Rearranged sentence Chipchip88 (talk) 02:24, 13 June 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:49, 14 June 2025 (UTC)