- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified New Republic Gungan diplomat
- Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 13:21, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Quite random nom, I must admit. An a quite short GAN too.
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 21:14, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:11, March 4, 2013 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:39, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 18:22, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Bah! I mistook that green hood thingy for his skin. Cade Calrayn
19:30, March 6, 2013 (UTC) - MasterFred(Whatever) 19:48, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
Object
CC-8
The start of the second sentence of the intro reads like its about a different person, can you change that?- Does that sound clearer to you? --LelalMekha (talk) 10:19, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
Say what Otoh Gunga is and what planet its on.Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 09:04, March 3, 2013 (UTC)- Added. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:19, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
Fred strikes
The article is already in past tense. Therefore, using terms such as "used to" is unnecessary as you can just put the verb in past tense. This occurs in the first sentence of the second paragraph in "Biography." Also, it makes it slightly harder to read with "used to."- Changed. --LelalMekha (talk) 19:06, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
- That's all. Very nice work. MasterFred(Whatever) 18:25, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you. --LelalMekha (talk) 19:06, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:48, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
Nice work, as always. Isn't there a better crop for the image? Also, you could probably mention the historical occasion that the picture hints at (he seems to be in a cortege, etc) Stake black msg 13:34, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- Do you have an idea what a better crop would be? Because the image's measures are quite inconvenient. :-s (By the way, I just added something relevant to what looks like a cortege. Tried not to make it sound too speculative.) --LelalMekha (talk) 15:19, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- I'll check my copy for a better crop and to check if everything is in order. I'll be back. Stake black msg 17:08, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- I bow before the superior powers of your scanner! :p --LelalMekha (talk) 19:59, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- File:Senators_and_Menageries.png For reference, all the written information that can be gathered. Which poses a problem: is this guy a Senator, an ambassador or both? Stake black msg 20:02, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- We cannot know that. Which is why I only call him a diplomat. --LelalMekha (talk) 20:11, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- File:Senators_and_Menageries.png For reference, all the written information that can be gathered. Which poses a problem: is this guy a Senator, an ambassador or both? Stake black msg 20:02, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- I bow before the superior powers of your scanner! :p --LelalMekha (talk) 19:59, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- I'll check my copy for a better crop and to check if everything is in order. I'll be back. Stake black msg 17:08, February 25, 2013 (UTC)