Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Naboo merchant (second nomination)

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Unidentified Naboo merchant

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:02, January 11, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: You only live twice, Mr. Merchant.

(0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:55, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • Very well written article. Just one minor thing, I think it would be nice to mention why he was arrested, or at least his claim, in the intro as well. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:24, January 11, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The details of his attire really belong in an Equipment section, not the P/T. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:49, February 10, 2019 (UTC)
    • Done. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:07, February 10, 2019 (UTC)
      • Before I strike, I don't suppose he uses any other equipment or device that might be mentioned in that section as well? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:30, February 11, 2019 (UTC)
        • Expanded. This has now brought the article over 1000 words. Unless there's some extraneous info that you would like me to cut, I'd like to request this nom to be removed so it can be transferred over to the FAN. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:37, February 11, 2019 (UTC)
          • I don't anticipate objecting to anything that would reduce that many words, so I'll go ahead and remove this for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:37, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

  • A few words, regarding the credibility of the Bts source, which was the main issue that led to the removal of GA status. I have added a reference coming from the same forum that identifies "Zanzibar" as an employee of Big Ape Productions, the developers of the game, which I believe is sufficient enough to make that person's word trustworthy. While the thread in question originates from a fan forum, I don't see how using it here would be any different from unverified Twitter accounts or any other number of online sources that we have used in the past. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:02, January 11, 2019 (UTC)
  • Does the video game credits need to be a separate citation than the game itself? I would think it should be just the same citation already used for the game. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:28, January 11, 2019 (UTC)