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Unidentified Kaleesh holy man

Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:13, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: I want a Kaleesh to bless me before I do anything
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~~"derogatorily as the Hul" is this meant to be Huk?~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:49, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- Of course. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:18, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
~~I think there's actually room for the image of the Kaleesh watching the ship fly away in the body.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- Done
The article currently implies that the Izvoshra kneel with Grievous, but the only other people I can see on the platform are the two refueling crew and two people who look like they board just as Grievous arrives. Hill and Grievous mention crew and soldiers later, but does a different source confirm the Izvoshra were onboard? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- I've removed their mention. The comic shows two people doing technical work with the ship, which our article for it assumes are the izvoshra, but I can't find anything to confirm it. Unknown Soldier does confirm that they were onboard Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 22:59, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

~~Context for Yam'rii itself and Visionaries in the BTS.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:50, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:11, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

~~Instead of saying the CIS wanted to make Grievous a cyborg, I think it would be more fitting in the context of this article to say that they wanted to recruit him.~~ OOM 224 20:34, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:57, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:07, 14 September 2021 (UTC)