Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Jedi (Altadan Igar)

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Unidentified Jedi (Altadan Igar)

  • Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 18:21, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Love the FACPOV stories
  • Date Archived: 15:45, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 784 words (115 introduction, 635 body, 34 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:31, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:17, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 17:39, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
  4. Brilliant OOM 224 (he/him) 10:10, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:44, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • Despite the date note mentioning the date of the Clone Wars, this is missing from the body. There should be separate notes for that and ROTJ anyway.
  • Review note: "while wielding a green-bladed lightsaber that sizzled in the rain" The color of the lightsaber is more suitable for Equipment, while the rain bit is play-by-play (the later mention of it works fine in that context). I've shortened it accordingly. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:40, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • "Retaking" the Separatist fortress implies that it was once under the control of the Republic or its allies. If the story doesn't say that, could you please reword those instances in the article? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:01, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Thought it said that for some reason, fixed now. Panther436 (talk) 01:20, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • I think it's worth noting that Igar was from Celes IV Lewisr (talk) 18:36, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Luke being a Jedi Knight, Vader being a Sith Lord, and the Death Star being a battle station isn't citable to the story Lewisr (talk) 18:36, 14 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:44, 17 December 2023 (UTC)