Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Imperial officer (Metalorn) (second nomination)

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Unidentified Imperial officer (Metalorn)

• Nominated by: Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 19:33, March 17, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Original nomination. Reason it failed was because I was unable to provide a source for the comic book's release date, as I was using one of the Marvel compendiums, which lacked the original dates. However, I was able to find an original copy of the comic which had all of the release date info on the first page, so the date can be sourced directly to the original book itself. This is my first "re-nom."

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:45, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 15:58, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
3. Good work Tommy Macaroni 16:12, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
4. MasterFred^(Whatever) 06:20, April 16, 2018 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:30, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• It is my belief that the article's body image should include the text from the one speech bubble that is still intact, per the rule. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:21, April 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Sure. Looking at the panel, though, I don't see a reason to not use more of the panel, so if it's alright let's use more. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 03:22, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
    • Fine with me. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:45, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• Galactic Civil War/Legends is intro exclusive. Tommy Macaroni 08:33, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 15:33, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
• "During the reign of the Galactic Empire…" shouldn't you link to Imperial Period here? Tommy Macaroni 15:35, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
  • Sure. Linked. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 16:10, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

Unidentified Imperators (Metalorn)

• Ref 2 should note that the info is based on corresponding info for the Metalorn system, as the Online Companion doesn't list planets. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:06, April 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • Did this one, since I know what he's looking for. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:48, April 16, 2018 (UTC)
    • I see. I'll keep this mind for the future. -Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 03:08, April 17, 2018 (UTC)
• Since ANH is by far not the only source dated to 0 BBY, ref 3 should explain that it is the Battle of Yavin, depicted in ANH, that serves as the dividing point between 0 BBY and 0 ABY. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:06, April 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • Ah, okay, makes sense. Fixed. -Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 03:08, April 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • Unfortunately, what you had there wasn't quite enough, since the comic doesn't make any mention of the Battle of Yavin, only a general reference that this comic series continues the events of A New Hope. The ref needs to establish the fact that Yavin is the final event of 0 BBY and that the events of this comic therefore cannot take place in 0 BBY. I believe I've made a satisfactory revision to that date reference. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:39, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:31, April 17, 2018 (UTC)