- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified Imperial commanding officer (Kathol Protector)
- Nominated by: Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 21:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments: One day, DarkStryder will be finished. And I will be old and grey. Well, old, at any rate.
(1 ACs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
- One day.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 22:46, January 5, 2012 (UTC) - Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:12, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 00:14, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Moffship
"While the corvette fought a valiant holding action in orbit..." - Just a little too POV.- Removed "valiant".
- That's all. Good work. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 02:04, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:40, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One
Sarne
- If Sarne's forces are distinct enough from the Empire to not get an extra bullet in the infobox --- is there any indication that this character actually served the non-warlord Galactic Empire?
- Is the officer mentioned in the sourcebook outside of Omens? If not, should The Darkstryder Campaign be in "Sources" at all? This is something I've been wondering about; we seem to treat the short stories as distinct from their parent sourcebooks, but I dunno. Let me know how you usually treat it. Menkooroo 23:55, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Nomination has been withdrawn. Further checking of source material shows I made a mistake in identification, and the article in question has been deleted since no actual mention of the character was made. My apologies. - Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 20:28, January 10, 2012 (UTC)