Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Imperial II-class Star Destroyer (asteroid collision)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Imperial II-class Star Destroyer (asteroid collision)

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:52, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: You've read about its captain - now read about the ship!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Kilson 13:35, 28 March 09 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 17:51, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
3. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 08:25, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
4. Cylka^-talk- 18:53, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 09:19, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
6. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 15:34, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. You should add picture of the captain in the history section. Also, give some context about Death Squadron in the intro. Other than that, good work. Klson Likes PIE 15:15, 26 March 09 (UTC)
   • There's no room for another picture, and there's already context on Death Squadron in the intro. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:05, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
     • No offense, but all you said was that it was lead by a Darth Vader, you didn't really say what it was. You should say that it was the a large Imperial Star Destroyer fleet assembled by Darth Vader, whose main purpose was to hunt down and destroy the Rebel Alliances main base. You might want to mention that Vader is a Dark Lord of the Sith. Also, I was able to fit in the main image of the unidentified captian into the page. I think it looks pretty good, but since it is your nom, you should get the final say. Kilson Likes PIE 18:17, 26 March 09 (UTC)
       • Indeed, which is why you shouldn't have added the image in the first place. I've removed it. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:54, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
         • Well, you don't have to get snippy. I just thought it would be better if the picture of the Captain was added and if you expanded the intro a little more. Kilson 20:00, 26 March 09 (UTC)
2. Yo! It's Floyd!
   • Every section seems to start the same way. Add some variety because it seems repetitive.
     • Heh, I didn't realize that. I switched some phrases around; let me know how it looks. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:50, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
   • "As the conference, presided over by the Dark Lord of the Sith himself," Identify the Dark Lord.
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:50, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 04:47, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review, Floyd. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:50, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
3. Cylka:
   • Not too long ago, Eyrezer had found a somewhat obscure CT in which it was decided that we shouldn't use links in in-article titles. I wasn't sure how you would like to change this, so I left it for you to decide.
     • I moved the link, but I would have preferred to keep it where it was. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:19, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
   • You explained the role of the Death Squadron in the intro, but not in the article body. Adding it in will necessitate rewriting a couple of sentences, so I wanted to leave that up to you as well.
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:19, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Good work, Tranner. Cylka^-talk- 00:27, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks, Cylka. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:19, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:34, 4 April 2009 (UTC)