- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified Imperial Advisor (black robe)
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:43, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another non-canon nom from me.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:16, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 18:06, August 26, 2014 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 00:32, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:09, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:17, September 16, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
I'm having trouble reconciling the fact that you essentially classify this character as an Imperial Advisor (note the capitalization, as this is a specific title within the Imperial bureaucracy) yet refer to him as an "advisor" (note the lack of capitalization). Does anything actually call this character an Advisor and/or advisor? If not, some changes will need to be made here.- Starships and Vehicles book, Character Encyclopedia and Kren Blista-Vanee's Galactic Files card all say advisor in the lowercase form.
- Motti the Barbarian also says "advisors." Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:55, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
- And as the author of the article, are you intending to assert that he is a formal Imperial Advisor? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:21, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Said to be in Who Are the Gentlemen With The Emperor?, amended referencing. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:28, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Then you should update all instances of the article, including the article title, to call him an "Imperial Advisor," as that is the correct, formal nomenclature, despite inconsistent sources using "Imperial advisor." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:04, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:25, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Then you should update all instances of the article, including the article title, to call him an "Imperial Advisor," as that is the correct, formal nomenclature, despite inconsistent sources using "Imperial advisor." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:04, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Said to be in Who Are the Gentlemen With The Emperor?, amended referencing. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:28, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- And as the author of the article, are you intending to assert that he is a formal Imperial Advisor? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:21, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Motti the Barbarian also says "advisors." Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:55, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
- Starships and Vehicles book, Character Encyclopedia and Kren Blista-Vanee's Galactic Files card all say advisor in the lowercase form.
External links go after Notes and references.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 13:27, September 2, 2014 (UTC)- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:44, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:17, September 16, 2014 (UTC)