Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Human Emperor's Voice (Second Great Galactic War)

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Unidentified Human Emperor's Voice (Second Great Galactic War)

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:30, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero. This guy's voiced by Pinhead.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 00:55, June 12, 2013 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 22:37, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:28, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:36, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Winterz (talk) 20:02, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • The article never introduces the idea that the Knight is traveling with companions, or a "crew," as you word it here. This should be introduced rather than just dropped in: "The Hero and crew infiltrated Dromund Kaas..." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:27, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
    • Made it "a crew of allies". Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:50, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:14, July 20, 2013 (UTC)