Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Gran worker

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Gran worker

• Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:12, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My WP:TCW nom number 3

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:54, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
2. Soon to appear in Fate of the Jedi. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 23:27, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
3. You referenced it fine. Kilson Likes PIE 21:36, 21 June 09 (UTC)
4. --Clone Commander Lee 18:27, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
5. Graestan^(Talk) 23:16, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
6. Nayayen(talk) 09:12, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Nayayen
   • "...to obtain several of the new starfighters for his squadron." Why did he want/need the new fighters?
     • Addressed.
   • You may want to mention in his P&T that he assumed that the Jedi were there for "A, uh, surprise inspection, is it?".
     • I'm afraid I don't see what relevance this has to his personality. Could you specify exactly what you think I should add? Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 13:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
       • True, it doesn't fit in the P&T. It would be better put in the main biography, the double page spread with that quote on gives the impression that he was highly surprised to see Skywalker there. Nayayen(talk) 14:21, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
         • Oops, forgot about this one :P. I just worked that info it into the text; I don't think the quote is as relative to the subject as the other quotes. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 00:06, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
   • — Nayayen(talk) 20:41, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
2. You beat me to him. :P You just need to add Pablo's intentions about the Grans working there to the the Bts, and it'll look almost as good as PIE. Kilson Like PIE 23:22, 20 June 09 (UTC)
   • Added, but I'm not sure if I referenced this correctly. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 13:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
     • Sorry about butting in here, but Jon, it would be best to use {{WebCite}} here for the ref. If you need help with it, let me know. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:48, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
       • Yeah, I've never done that before. Would you mind showing me how it's done? Thanks CC :). Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 00:02, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
         • I've filled in what I can, but you're going to have to fill in the rest, namely the access date. Also, that needs to be listed under the Sources. Perhaps Hidigano's post could be quoted in the Bts? Also, you may want to note that the intentions of the Gran were conjecture, since it wasn't confirmed in the comic. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:08, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
           • Addressed? Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 00:58, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
3. The Clone
   • Unfortunately, the entire article requires sourcing, as 22 BBY isn't referenceable to the comic; it has to be "around 22 BBY" and referenced to the TCW novel. Also, likewise with Shadow of Malevolence being the third episode of the TV series, except that has to be referenced to the ep guide.
     • Addressed.
   • Can you get another image in somewhere? CC7567 ^(talk) 07:35, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
     • Added one of the testing facility. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 13:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:23, 30 June 2009 (UTC)