Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Curich-class shuttle

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Unidentified Curich-class shuttle

Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:31, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
Nomination comments: After the small break with Jop, I return to DarkStryder.

~~In the infobox "destroyed" field, would it not be more expedient to simply state "Aaris III"? I feel it would make the infobox appear a bit less unwieldy.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:31, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Removed as suggested. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:44, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

"the base camp came under almost nightly attack[2] from the Aaris's primitive descendants" reads a little confusingly, since the extinct species hasn't been identified as Aaris yet.
- Added explicit mention of the Aaris to first history paragraph.
~~Do you think the disagreement between Lancer and Jelok is really that relevant to the shuttle?~~
- Yes, since it sets up that Jelok was escorted to the shuttle. Also, the implication in the adventure - despite the CSWE's assertion that the Aaris attacked the camp - is that the team turned on one another. This in turn implies that Jelok had a hand in destroying the shuttle since he was escorted there and didn't want to leave. Since there is no explicit confirmation that the Aaris destroyed the shuttle, placing Jelok at the scene is vital to at least place him among the likely suspects of the act.
How do you feel about sourcing the first paragraph of the bts to something that depicts an identified image of a Curich-class shuttle (or at least mentioning that source in the text itself)? Menkooroo 07:38, October 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Added image and brief mention of Curich-class shuttle's WEG appearance. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:12, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:40, October 29, 2010 (UTC)