Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Clone Captain (Tranquility)

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Unidentified Clone Captain (Tranquility)

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:09, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Getting back in the groove.
• Date Archived: 12:26, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 657 words (156 introduction, 456 body, 45 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:14, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 01:13, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 01:23, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:02, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
5. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:23, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Should specify what the other clone trooper called 327-T Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:09, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 11:46, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• The P+T has the captain as male—was this perhaps a holdover from an old edit? Noticed it wasn't in the infobox.—spookywilloww^talk 18:24, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Yeah, looks like it. Thanks! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
• Given the four paragraphs in the biography, I think those could be split into two separate subsections decently well.—spookywilloww^talk 00:30, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 12:11, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

Fan

• The second paragraph of the Bio can be trimmed down slightly: "the flagship of Jedi General Luminara Unduli and her fleet group." ---> "the flagship of Jedi General Luminara Unduli's fleet group." and removed "Eventually" from the beginning of the subsequent sentence
• "After confirming with their comrade if they witnessed anything and examining the room," is this referring to the captain's accompanying trooper or the Republic treadwell droid?
• "and acknowledged an order by Gree ordering the captain " Please reword this Fan26 (Talk) 19:29, 2 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed all. Thanks --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:23, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Still unsure about the second objection-is the relevant sentence talking about the other clone trooper? Fan26 (Talk) 20:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 12:11, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 18:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• Star Wars: Timelines dates both "Bombad Jedi" and "Cloak of Darkness" to 21 BBY, so that should be updated for your dating.
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 12:14, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
• Can Gunray being a member of the Separatist Council be cited to the episode? Lewisr (talk) 01:58, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 12:14, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
• I'm not sure why the following was included, could you amend so that its inclusion makes a bit more sense? 'Despite being an officer, the clone did not personalize their standard phase I clone trooper armor or upgrade it with any additional equipment.' Lewisr (talk) 13:39, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:46, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• Just want to confirm the episode calls Rodia a planet. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:44, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Yes, it uses "remote world of Rodia" in the intro. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 12:01, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to strike objection (AC only)

1. For Fan's per dating on it.—spookywilloww^talk 04:30, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 04:31, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:23, 29 June 2023 (UTC)