Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Black Sun agent

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Unidentified Black Sun agent

Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 19:28, 26 April 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: For WookieeProject: Pride

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:33, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 22:25, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
Great work, Immi OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 15:51, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 20:58, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

~~Needs a P&T section~~
- Added, thank you! Please let me know if it's sufficient or has any issues. Immi Thrax (talk) 22:49, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
  - It's all good, but would there be a quote available? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:11, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
    - Added another quote! I've now quoted almost all their dialogue, heh. Nothing said about their equipment/ship, though. Immi Thrax (talk) 20:53, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
~~Would their ship and Ahsoka's freighter be notable enough for articles?~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:18, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- I don't think there's anything to notable about their ship that can't be covered by their article (also added it to their Equipment section), but the ship Ahsoka uses is notable. I'll discuss on Discord what to name the article before stubbing it. Immi Thrax (talk) 22:49, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Unidentified light freighter (Thabeska) now made--let me know what you think about the agent's ship. I'm not totally clear on the criteria for ship notability. Immi Thrax (talk) 00:45, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
  - I'll defer to the judgement of people who have read the book. Is it a similar case with the ship Bail Organa's pals use? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:11, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
    - Discussed this on Discord for feedback, and created Unidentified Black Sun starship and Chardri Tage's starship. Immi Thrax (talk) 20:53, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

~~The image caption should be modified to be relevant to the article subject. Its size can be increased a bit as well.~~

"Tano was unable to identify their species or their gender" implies to me that their gender is unspecified as opposed to being concretely non-binary, so I think that can be reworded.

I would mention their being non-binary in the intro.

Is ref 5 really necessary? It seems that it can just be sourced to the novel.

~~It seems that a pilots category would be appropriate.~~ JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:24, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
- Made edits to address all of these—have a look! Perhaps ref 5 is overdoing it, but since the BTS quote is from it, I wanted to be sure there was also a ref to account for where the quote was from, if that makes sense? Immi Thrax (talk) 23:14, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
  - I personally support the reference since it is, well, referenced :) -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 23:38, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
    - Looks good, nice work. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:50, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

Imp

~~Oof, that Black Sun logo image is basically unsourced. Big no-no (GAN rule 4). And its file page doesn't even indicate that it's actually used in a Canon source...~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 21:31, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
- No need to scold. The logo file information has been updated, is that sufficient? Immi Thrax (talk) 02:12, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Ecks

Just one small objection: Parts of the article, particularly towards the end of the body, could really use some variation to just referring to the subject as "they". "The agent" (like you already use), "the Black Sun operative", etc are all viable alternatives. The second paragraph of the PT, for example, only refers to the subject as "they". 1358 ^(Talk) 19:47, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
- How's that? Immi Thrax (talk) 20:22, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:58, 30 June 2021 (UTC)