Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Akwin

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Unidentified Akwin

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:52, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More Lazerian IV
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. AxMech (talk) 13:26, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:00, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
  3. Fan26 (Talk) 05:29, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 14:16, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:38, 31 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Why is there a date note without the actual date being mentioned in the article?
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:25, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
  • "where he captured the image" I don't think captured should be used in relation to an object. I would have changed it in my copy-edit, but I'm not sure about what the source uses.
    • Rephrased to "took," but "capturing" images is a way of phrasing it IRL as well. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:25, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
  • "who confronted their uninvited guests" does the source not elaborate?
    • It does not. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:25, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
  • (Review note) My copy-edit and nice work :) LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 06:02, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Looks good, thanks. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:25, 13 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:38, 31 January 2023 (UTC)