Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Advanced Recon Commando (intelligence officer)

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Unidentified Advanced Recon Commando (intelligence officer)

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:58, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Just another ARC, which automatically makes him awesome.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:28, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:58, January 11, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:15, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Winterz (talk) 18:19, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Did a copy-edit. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:43, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:30, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo
  • This might be a sofixit, but remember to include all infobox info in the body, which means you need to mention the height. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:18, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
Winterz
  • An hyphen? O.O Kill it quickly before it destroys us all! (Per our emdash and endash policy) Winterz (talk) 14:11, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 17:16, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
      • I actually meant to replace the hyphens with emdashes but regardless, it looks better how it is now. Good work. Winterz (talk) 18:18, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • As we've been tending to do lately, I would ask that the beginning of the Bio be reworded slightly to avoid referring to the character as "this," which implies that the wiki article is being written in the same time frame as the character's story, which is not the case coming from an encyclopedic perspective. It would start something like, "An Advanced Recon Commando," "A Human male clone," etc. I'll leave it up to you how you want to integrate the necessary details.
    • Done, working on the other objection, CC.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:57, February 15, 2013 (UTC)
  • Can the general information on ARC troopers from The Clone Wars Campaign Guide be accurately applied to this character? I realize that the information comes from an official source, but it seems to be speaking of the general nature of ARC troopers when they aren't all like that. Especially with the appearance of ARC troopers in The Clone Wars: Season Three, we don't know now if all of them were trained by Fett himself, since it's clear that some of them weren't and were instead promoted to the rank. Please clarify.
    • I think I have worked out the wording, basing it off of some of the articles on the anonymous Imperial Knights. Please take a look.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 17:01, February 15, 2013 (UTC)
      • Since the self-sufficiency/not entirely independent part is more of a personality trait, I would recommend moving it to the P&T. It would be okay where it currently is if we knew it applied to this character, but since we don't, I think it would fit better in the P&T. CC7567 (talk) 17:12, February 15, 2013 (UTC)
  • I'll finish looking at the Bio and the rest of the article once these two are addressed. CC7567 (talk) 04:31, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Republic Intelligence HQ sounds like it should have an article or at least be linked.
  • The second sentence of the P&T needs to be adjusted per the earlier objection about The Clone Wars Campaign Guide.
  • The information from the lead quote about how the Trandoshans were going to sell the package to the Separatists seems relevant to mention in the Bio, as it was another parameter of the mission objective (to prevent the package from falling to Separatist hands). CC7567 (talk) 17:12, February 15, 2013 (UTC)
    • All taken care of, I believe. I'm genuinely surprised, that an article on the headquarters wasn't created sooner.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 18:24, February 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:30, February 16, 2013 (UTC)