Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tynna

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Tynna

Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:09, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Been working on this between exam prep. Word count is high so be careful :P
Date Archived: 19:05, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 779 words (157 introduction, 492 body, 130 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:AST, WP:CIS, WP:FFGAMES

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~~I think there's a typo in "Post-Empire"'s quote, but I don't have my copy of Rebel Files here on vacation with me so I can't double check.~~
~~Incorrect publication date for The Essential Guide to Planets and Moons-'09 is the Atlas :P~~ Fan26 (Talk) 13:52, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
- Both fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 15:33, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

~~"Senatorial arrests" isn't a proper noun, and I don't think it should be capitalized if it isn't. Recommend rewording that caption.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 17:32, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
- How's that? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:19, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
OK, I'm gonna have to call for the removal of the entire Post-Empire section. It has nothing to do with the history of Tynna - for one, we don't even know whether Deep Fathom still operated on Tynna, it being led by a Tynnan notwithstanding.
~~You're using "on Tynna" in the article's text, so is the planet terrestrial?~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 08:59, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:32, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:05, 14 August 2023 (UTC)