Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Trade Federation outpost

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Trade Federation outpost

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:33, November 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Hoping to get some occasional nominations going.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Made some slight adjustments, but otherwise looks good. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 11:35, December 2, 2019 (UTC)
  2. LordMominutiae (talk) 00:33, January 16, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 06:22, January 20, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 07:38, January 20, 2020 (UTC)
  5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:20, January 20, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:03, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • For starters, I will draw your attention to the fact that this article title is not conjectural, since the phrase "Trade Federation outpost" is used in the source (see main quote). Therefore, that header template should be removed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:49, December 19, 2019 (UTC)
    • Done and adjusted the intro and first sentence of the description to refer to the title as it is written. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:11, December 20, 2019 (UTC)
Anil
  • (Reviewing note) When formatting file names, you should use underscores instead of spaces. "Trade_Federation_troop_center.png" "instead of Trade Federation troop center.png," for example.
  • (Reviewing note) I have also replaced two en dashes with hyphens instead, per Wookieepedia:Manual of Style/Proper use of the dash.
    • Thanks for those, I am aware of the underscoring but it's one of those things that slips through sometimes.
  • The article body doesn't reflect that the base was destroyed between 39 BBY and 36 BBY. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:54, January 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've reworded the start of the history section so the date is shown in the context of the war, rather than just repeating the date. I hope that's explicit enough. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:40, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:03, January 20, 2020 (UTC)


  • This article has been moved to remove the unnecessary parentheses, since there are no competing articles for this title, in accordance with the Naming policy. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:48, December 19, 2019 (UTC)