- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Traan
- Nominated by: Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 10:19, February 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I love Jeff Bridges in anything. Traan, Traan Legacy...
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Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 01:20, February 23, 2011 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:19, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 19:03, February 27, 2011 (UTC)- Nothing out of sorts to me. Even looked through it for niggly things to fix. I'd go on to say how much I loved the book, but no one wants to read that. =P Trak Nar Ramble on 05:13, March 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Master Jonathan (Council Chambers) Friday, March 4, 2011, 23:47 UTC
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Moffship
The info on the Great Galactic War and the Cold War in the first sentence of the bio needs a separate reference, as neither are directly mentioned in the novel.- Taken care of.
- Good work. We'll need to divide up the remaining characters among the both of us before anyone else can claim them. :p Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:35, February 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Good call. Maybe we can let Jon have one or two. Maybe. :P Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 23:46, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
Just one. Would it be appropriate to pipelink the Dark Side Adept article to the following mention. It seems perhaps indirectly relevant to me: "new generations of dark side adepts."Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:08, February 24, 2011 (UTC)- I've actually pipelinked it to Sith adept, as that's a little bit more specific than the broader "Dark Side Adepts". I did keep the uncapitalized phrase "dark side adepts," as opposed to changing the wording to "Sith adepts" because I'm hoping to avoid over-repetition of the word "Sith" in the prose. Let me know if this works for ya. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 20:17, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
- Yeah, perfect. Nice work overall. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:19, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
- I've actually pipelinked it to Sith adept, as that's a little bit more specific than the broader "Dark Side Adepts". I did keep the uncapitalized phrase "dark side adepts," as opposed to changing the wording to "Sith adepts" because I'm hoping to avoid over-repetition of the word "Sith" in the prose. Let me know if this works for ya. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 20:17, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
From the Council Chambers:
"The Masters collectively decided that the as-of-yet unknown goings-on were a significant threat,": According to Dictionary.com, "goings-on" is an informal term, and "as-of-yet" is not a word at all. Please replace both.- Otherwise looks good. Master Jonathan (Council Chambers) Thursday, March 3, 2011, 22:50 UTC
- Done. Thanks for the review. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:49, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:23, March 5, 2011 (UTC)