Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tosan

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Tosan

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 17:27, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
  2. Zed42 (talk) 03:08, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
    Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 12:36, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
  3. Nice work --Lewisr (talk) 01:14, January 9, 2019 (UTC)
  4. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:30, January 12, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:08, January 13, 2019 (UTC)
  6. Well-looking article. --С уважением, Starit (обс) 10:05, January 20, 2019 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:56, January 31, 2019 (UTC)
  8. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:37, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • I'm unsure, but can the Galaxy of Heroes stuff be used as canonical information? Additionally, are you sure Tosan is meant to be the exact same character, or just a nod to it?
    • Galaxy of Heroes is just a sandbox game that features both canon and Legends characters, and it doesn't mix the two continuities in regards of information. This is the reason why we put the game in the "Non-canon appearances," in contrast to the obvious non-canon stuff like Disney Infinity 3.0 and LEGO. If you are still not satisfied, I hope that there'll be an official solution to this after tonight's Mofference. About the latter, both characters are the same species, and have exact same clothing. Since the comic book's writer confirmed it that was "100%" intentional, I don't see why we wouldn't consider them the same. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
      • I don't really see any reason why it couldn't be used as canon, especially since it's mostly minor details, but I might wait to see the consensus and what others think of it. Zed42 (talk) 21:58, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
        • My motion has just passed. We now treat Star Wars: Galaxy of Heroes as canon, besides the obvious Legends SWTOR stuff. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:44, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
          • In that case, I'll strike the objection. Zed42 (talk) 03:08, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
          • Im not certain that is something the Lucasfilm Story Group would agree with?--Afilmfanforlife (talk) 23:46, January 8, 2019 (UTC)
            • When there is no direct word from the Story Group the best we can do is decide for ourselves what to do, which we have --Lewisr (talk) 23:48, January 8, 2019 (UTC)
            • Exactly, we were the ones who decided to treat the game as non-canon in the first place. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)
  • The second sentence in the Biography paragraph could do with a slight rewording. Maybe move the information about what Kenobi was doing to directly after his name is mentioned.
  • Also, you wrote "Tolvan" in the next sentence. Zed42 (talk) 09:45, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
Tommy
  • I think the intro can be expanded beyond two sentences. Perhaps get in her tenacious nature and lightsaber type, at least?
  • Not sure how you want to interpret "Jedi Knight guardian", as either a Jedi Knight who was a guardian or a guardian of Jedi Knights, but I think this should be mentioned in some capacity in the body.
    • Isn't saying she was a knight and a master contradictory? I'd guess she was originally a knight and then was promoted. Maybe say at one point she was a knight, but when she met Obi-Wan she was a master?
  • Can we get some context for Coruscant and holocrons? I also think you may wish to rearrange the Coruscant and Jedi Temple mention so it's in direct reference to Tosan and not just as part of the Obi-Wan context, seeing as she's there too, but that's up to you. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 13:36, January 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • "Some time after the Battle of Naboo[1] in 32 BBY,[3] at the Jedi Temple on the Republic's capital world of Coruscant, she informed Jedi Knight Obi-Wan Kenobi, who was training his Padawan Anakin Skywalker, that the Jedi Council had assigned him a mission." Please split this sentence up. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 15:54, January 12, 2019 (UTC)
Ben
Toprawa
  • I would request to see a Canon source that uses the terms "undertunic" and "overtunic," as these don't seem to actually be formally recognized words in real life.
    • I didn't manage to find a canon source for that. However, I'm no native speaker, but the terms appear to exist in Wiktionary. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:46, February 4, 2019 (UTC)
      • FWIW, Legends does use both "undertunic" and "overtunic." Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, February 4, 2019 (UTC)
  • What is the rationale for saying she occasionally wore gloves? Do we ever see her not wearing gloves? "Tosan also occasionally wore a pair of brown gloves." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:53, February 4, 2019 (UTC)
    • She wears gloves in the Galaxy of Heroes app, but not in the Age of Republic comic book. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:46, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:37, February 7, 2019 (UTC)