Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tooke

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Tooke

• Nominated by: MasterFredcerique 19:53, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More WP:GE for ya!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Good work. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 07:51, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
2. Objections handled via IRC. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:06, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:37, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:45, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
5. TK-462 (talk) 01:13, April 22, 2020 (UTC)
6. Tommy Macaroni 20:39, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Braha'tok enthusiast

• You should mention the date from the History section in the intro. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 06:39, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. MasterFredcerique 02:41, April 15, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• Per recent precedent, we're trying to have the attribution of quotes that are from in-universe works in the format [In-universe author], [In-universe book]. See Lasan/Legends as an example.
• "Two weeks after the arrival of the First Order on Batuu[2] around 34 ABY,[3] the Amani female Bina, who owned the local Creature Stall in Black Spire Outpost, included tookes in her interactive guide, Bina's Guide to the Creatures of Batuu, which her workers handed out to younglings nine years old or younger free of charge." - I feel like this should be broken up for better flow. Also, I think the "around 34 ABY" bit should be preceded by a comma too to make it less abrupt. Tommy Macaroni 14:13, April 21, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• I apologize, I nominated before I saw the last objection, even though I'd just read the article. My bad. TK-462 (talk) 01:16, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:39, April 22, 2020 (UTC)