- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
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Tono's Teahouse
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 21:05, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 03:38, 22 October 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1026 words (59 introduction, 644 body, 323 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 744 words (59 introduction, 538 body, 147 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:NOVELS, WP:ENT
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Comet
- The Bandit raid section looks like it has room for an image
- The type field in the infobox could be filled out
- Category:Outer Rim Territories structures could be added
- I know the art labels it R1-G4, but isn't that actually R1-Q10? I think it's just labeled that to show where the design is coming from; I doubt it's literally meant to be the exact same individual droid from A New Hope
- I see what you mean, but how would I reference that? We don't have definitive information either way. Stake black msg 03:33, 22 October 2025 (UTC)
- The concept art should be mentioned in the BTS
- The storyboard shown in the BTS could be added to the Storyboard section of the concept art gallery
- It's appearance in the trailers should be mentioned in the BTS
- The BTS mentions "the novel" in the final sentence, but the novel is never introduced at any point prior to that
- The information about the shopkeep's inspiration is all citable to The Art of Star Wars: Visions, so I think it may be good to cite it to that instead, since that's available in English
- The final sentence of the Description doesn't seem entirely citable to the article linked, since it mentions the Sith rebellion. Most of that sentence is also citable to English sources anyway, so it would be better to use those.
- Currently, I think it reads as if the Ronin is given tea before fixing the droid and then never gets around to it, so I think that should be more explicitly detailed (and that it was done within an hour)
- There's some more details that I think should be mentioned. There might be even more than this, but some things I think should be added are that the floor is described as clean-swept in the novel, two bandits look up toward the teahouse, the shopkeep tries to get the Ronin/B5-56 to hide inside, and the shopkeep uses the power droid to warm his tea. CometSmudge (talk) 18:57, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
- Reworked the issues above. Stake black msg 03:33, 22 October 2025 (UTC)