Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Toluz Cheq

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Toluz Cheq

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:34, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I was bored.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:25, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote -- 1358 (Talk) 11:43, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
  3. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:23, September 13, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:26, September 13, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Xd1358
  • "…Cheq had managed to transmit the valuable…" Please watch your usage of 'the', which implies that you have introduced the subject before. Also, in the image caption, there is no need for 'the', as there are many of them.
    • Addressed.
  • Please choose whether you go with Confederate or Separatist.
  • -- 1358 (Talk) 22:06, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • This droid could probably use an article. Please at least leave a redlink: "Cheq ordered his R3 unit to establish a holographic connection"
    • Created a stub.
  • Should there not also be an article, if not a redlink, for this mission? "Skywalker and Master Obi-Wan Kenobi went to Valahari on a diplomatic mission." Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:31, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
    • I don't think it warrants an article. They just had a dinner with the Vanes and Dooku, and Skywalker engaged in a podracer competition with Tofen. There was a slight argument between Skywalker and Dooku during the dinner, but apart from that, nothing of note really happened. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 12:15, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)