- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Tolomar Reez
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:37, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The only member of Kanjiklub whose death is undisputable
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 06:34, February 23, 2018 (UTC)
- —Tommy-Macaroni
(TAKE A SEAT) 19:24, March 3, 2018 (UTC) 
1358 (Talk) 20:23, March 29, 2018 (UTC)- Damn, Solo really is an unflinching murderer. Imperators II(Talk) 11:04, April 2, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:47, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
Object
Tommy
You're missing permanent archival links.—Tommy-Macaroni (TAKE A SEAT) 18:53, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:21, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
"both groups boarded Solo's[3] Baleen-class heavy freighter Eravana[1] above the planet Jakku.[3]" … "Reez and the other Kanjiklub members left their ship and marched…" The "boarding" already implies they entered Solo's ship, thereby leaving their own, so the second part seems a bit redundant.- Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:50, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
The first Bts paragraph break feels out of place; you're discussing the game in both of the paragraphs so it'd be logical the entire thing would be in the same place.1358 (Talk) 22:27, March 28, 2018 (UTC)- Removed the split. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:50, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
One more actually: No more quotes? It's been a while since I saw TFA but you write that Leech orders his men to search the ship so that quote would probably be approriate.1358 (Talk) 21:27, April 2, 2018 (UTC)- Added the quote. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:25, April 4, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
In the infobox, why specifically do we need two refs next to the Eravana in the death field?- If I may add to this, the Nar Kanji ref is used too frequently in the article. I'm guessing it got mixed up with a regular TFAVD ref. Imperators II(Talk) 10:23, April 5, 2018 (UTC)
- Oops, I managed to screw up my Visual Dictionary referencing while addressing a previous objection. I've now fixed it and removed some of the references for the Eravana and boiler rifle's names per previous discussions on sourcing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:59, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
- If I may add to this, the Nar Kanji ref is used too frequently in the article. I'm guessing it got mixed up with a regular TFAVD ref. Imperators II(Talk) 10:23, April 5, 2018 (UTC)
If you're going to use that quote in the second Bio subsection, I'd recommend cutting it so we don't hear the second character repeating it. That way, you can tailor the quote attribution to say that Qin-Fee is giving orders to Reez and the rest of Kanjiklub rather than having to mention the second character.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:59, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
In the Appearances list, I placed the comic issue before Han & Chewie Return, as (correct me if I'm wrong) the issue begins earlier than the book.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:24, April 5, 2018 (UTC)- Thanks for catching that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:59, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:47, April 10, 2018 (UTC)