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Tlactehon
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 10:31, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Fan26 (Talk) 14:13, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
- NaruHina Talk
18:27, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:50, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Tommy Macaroni 17:36, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, October 18, 2019 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
The Essential Atlas should be listed in the Sources by virtue of the map picture in the infobox.- Added. Imperators II(Talk) 08:01, October 15, 2019 (UTC)
This is not self-sourcing and will need citation: "...an incarnation of the Galactic Empire occasionally referred to as the 'Empire'..."- Sourced. Imperators II(Talk) 08:01, October 15, 2019 (UTC)
The intro would be much better served by mentioning the Vong occupation of the system instead of the tangentially related delegation mishap not happening at Tlactehon.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:53, October 15, 2019 (UTC)- Changed. Imperators II(Talk) 08:01, October 15, 2019 (UTC)
- I actually meant to just remove the third sentence about the events specifically taking place at Muunilist and replace it with the Yuuzhan Vong thing. I've gone and ahead and re-added the second sentence, then. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:41, October 17, 2019 (UTC)
- Changed. Imperators II(Talk) 08:01, October 15, 2019 (UTC)
With regard to the "agent" link, I removed that in my review because it's not applicable to link to the Agent article when referring to the generic term. In both Canon and Legends, "Agent" (and Special Agent as a similar example) is a specific rank that some people have. Agent Kallus, for example. This is a totally different application than saying, for example, "Han Solo was an agent of the Rebel Alliance." Unless the source gives a specific indication that these "agents" in this article hold this rank, I don't think we should be linking.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:41, October 17, 2019 (UTC)- I thought that for some reason "agents of the New Republic Intelligence and Imperial Security Bureau" would be different, but guess not. Removed. Imperators II(Talk) 07:54, October 18, 2019 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:15, October 18, 2019 (UTC)