Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Titus Klev

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Titus Klev

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 15:51, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part of Project Ambition.

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:11, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
2. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:27, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
3. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:17, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:48, 26 November 2008 (UTC).
5. IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 02:14, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

Object

1. Chack Attack:
   • "He earned both a commendation and a promotion for the action. His path potentially could have led to becoming a Moff." This should be rephraed. It reads awakwardly and is borderline OOU.
   • Context on SubAdult and Wegsphere in the body.
   • "Commander Klev was given his first command, commanding..." Too many forms of command. Please change one.
   • Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:37, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 21:58, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• There's a little over 800 words. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 15:53, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
• Just received word that Titus Klev has an entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia; I'll get any new info up as soon as I can get the encyclopedia. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:54, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:27, 1 December 2008 (UTC)